Black Widow (satirical content?)
Black Widow (Pretty Girl) Pretty girl With a highlight smileDressed all in black,Brilliant eyes Full Of guile,Wont youStay For a while? Full of laughter, withoutA care,Stalk the streets,Panther-esque...
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Quote:Black Widow (Pretty Girl) [If she's a Black Widow spider, I think she has to kill them at least metaphorically][You mentioned "enjambment". I'm not exactly sure what you would like to do]Pretty...
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EzCode Parsing Error: size=2]hmm.. that's a good point. enjambment is simply another form of poetry (so l've been told), l heard about it on another writing site, but l'm not sure of too many details....
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enjabment really isn't 'another' form of poetry.. it is a poetic device. In simple terms, it means a line break that does not end on punctuation, where the meaninng of that line flows into the next....
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I just used the bold to show where I changed your word arrangement. It's just to alert you that I have proposed moving the line around a little. I don't want you to take anything out. I just played...
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kay. actually, l like the way you've done it - l'm definitely going to take it into consideration, cus this one's been - bugging - me for a bit now. lol, actually l think it does need a few things...
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The first thing I would do is line it to the left - it might be better as far as structural reading. And perhaps give the title a bit of a boost? I like Doug's suggestions.It is quite nice - just...
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laurie this is tantalizing, sensuous and beguiling, mesmerizing me with it's rhythms and rhymes, it's seriously kool beyond belief, enjoyed !!!!!!!
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Goth girls... so pretty. So moody! Heh!I liked reading this. The observer thinks, "Is she empowered, or just learned how to be comfortable in her promiscuity (to be comfortable with the rumors)?"I...
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